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Friday, October 23, 2020

flower poem

Room 12 has been doing some poems for the flower show competition at the high school on Halloween. Here is mine.




4 comments:

  1. hey i like you work that you have been doing but it will look cinder better with more sentences

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  2. Great poster Daejhar.
    I like that it is easy to read and not over crowded.
    I also like that you explained why you were writing the poem and what you were going to do with it.
    Have a great long weekend.

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  3. Wow darling this is amazing and simple and love the descriptive words you used as well keep up the great work hunny xx

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  4. Hello Daejhar.
    Just a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today

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