Room 12 has been doing some poems for the flower show competition at the high school on Halloween. Here is mine.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 4 and my teacher is Mr Martyn. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, October 23, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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hey i like you work that you have been doing but it will look cinder better with more sentences
ReplyDeleteGreat poster Daejhar.
ReplyDeleteI like that it is easy to read and not over crowded.
I also like that you explained why you were writing the poem and what you were going to do with it.
Have a great long weekend.
Wow darling this is amazing and simple and love the descriptive words you used as well keep up the great work hunny xx
ReplyDeleteHello Daejhar.
ReplyDeleteJust a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today