We have been doing invetions that have changed the world.
I have been doing a slide show about the bike.
would you ever ride this bike
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 4 and my teacher is Mr Martyn. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Tuesday, August 4, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Daejhar i really like your work i like the bike next time you could add more detail
ReplyDeleteok but I did not do this my mum did
ReplyDeleteDarling you did the work I just did the scribing to show you that adding some details can make it more interesting for your readers 😊
ReplyDeleteWell done daejhar it was awesome to see you and mum working together on this your working hard and doing great so proud of you
ReplyDeleteThis is so cool daejhar x awesome to see you learning new stuff x
ReplyDeleteI am so glad that bikes have been reinvented over the years.This bike looks like it would be very uncomfortable to ride.
ReplyDeleteDo you know how to steer it?.It looks as if it has no handle bars.👍