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Friday, March 26, 2021

100 word count

Hello everybody. In room 10 we have been doing. 100 word count for reading. It was hard becaues it had to be 100 words . we have a prompt ever week that we have to inclued in our 100 word count .here is one of my storys .
This is the prompt 

‘… but where did it go?’ she shouted…

One day I went to pak n save with my mum and my little sister.  We had to get some buns for our lunches, they were all the way at the end of the row. We didn't have to walk that long but it was hard to walk back  because we used all our energy and got tired. Then we left our trolley somewhere in the shop. Mum looked really worried,  ‘ but where did it go?’ she shouted. We had to go all around the shop looking for it, we found it in the freezer department, luckily it wasn’t frozen. 


1 comment:

  1. COOL story Daejhar.
    When I go for a walk and find a trolley that needs to go back to the shop,Samantha and I take turns at pushing each other in it.
    We make sure that we go over all the bumps on the footpath.
    What sort of buns did you buy?.
    I liek the ones with cream and jam in them.

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