A little boy named Jimmy was playing with his aeroplane. while the chief police was chasing two robbers, one was sitting in the back.
The police were racing as fast as they could. The robbers went fast and crashed into a brick wall. The driver couldn't see because of the sun and almost ran little Jimmy over.
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Hi Daejhar, I like how you named your character. Did You enjoy it? How long did it take you?
ReplyDeleteGood morning Daejhar.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad Jimmy was ok.
The next time you write an article maybe you could add a little bit more detail to drag your readers in.
You mentioned that one robber was sitting in the back,but both robbers were being chased.
Were the robbers in a car or were they on foot?.
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